Sunday, March 13, 2011

sonnets

Petrarchan sonnets:

A Game of Soccer:

1.Sunrise: The town's summer wakes people up A
2.Shine brilliance on the river color blue B
3.clouds disappearing from the darkest sky B
4.sunlight lightened  to this town. The heart make A         octet 8 lines
5.peace and happiness to the human being C
6.the sun lightened up the green soccer field D
7.for our team of soccer. The supporters D
8.begin to scream for the team they support. C

9.A game: The team heart began to tremble, E
10.to choose among the kickoff or the field F
11.captains began to return back to their team. G              Sestet :  6 lines

12.Only the best team could win this biggest E
13.game. slide, dribble, and kick the ball up high F
14.until it will passes through the goalpost. G


Indonesian Army:

1.The sunlight rise as the soldiers woke up A
2.20,000 thousand soldiers were on the trenches B
3.They were ready for the japans to strike B
4.Guns were loaded, and the teams were formed A
5.The sunlight strike the Indonesian soldiers they C             Octave: 8 lines
6.were tired guarding their trenches and troops. D
7.building more shell holes on the rusty trench D
8.So the soldiers will be more safer there. C

9.One Indonesian soldiers seem to see one troop E
10.that was holding a flag. Its the Japan! F
11.The Indonesian started to shoot with their guns. G    Sestet: 6 lines
12.The japan started to shoot back at us E
13.Indonesian never give up on anything F
14.The Asians were in a very big war. G



Shakespearean sonnets:

Should i compare a summer with winter?

1.Should i compare a summer with winter? A
2The summer have a temperate weather B
3.the rough winds are breezing to the green trees A  
4.summer where the rain will never go down. B            4 Lines Quatrain
5.The gold shining sun shines to summer breeze C
6.The animals on the forest go out D
7.Searching for food and water to drink. C
8.By chance the nature will change in a month D
9.The summer will fade and the season change E
10.The cold winter comes out after summer F
11.The white cold snow will come out at winter E
12.animals Searching food for the winter.  F
13.So long the winter end as we can see , G  Ending          Two sentence rhymes
14.So long the summer end as we can see. G     Couplet


Explanation: Petrarchan

Petrarchan sonnets have 10 syllables in each line. Petrarchan sonnet have 8 lines in the first stanza that is named octet and in the second stanza that have 6 lines and named sestet.

Shape Poem

Soccer Ball


















Wind

Freestyle Poem

All I Want: Rhyming word

All i want is someone to teach me
Someone to listen, and talk about
All i want is someone to teach me
Someone to understand me
Someone to trust me
All i want is someone to teach me
Someone to teach science
Someone to teach me math
Someone to teach me English
All i want is someone to teach me
Someone to help me with something
Someone to support me
Someone to cheer me
Someone to make me smarter
All I want is some one to understand in school

I cant write a poem: non rhyming:

Forget it 
You must be kidding
I'm bored
I'm sleepy
I'm lazy
I'm confused
I don't have any pencil
I don''t bring my lecture note
I don't understand
I don't know what is a poem
I'm hungry for food
i don't have any energy to write
Times up uh oh!
All i have is dumb excuses
You like it really? no kidding
Thanks a lot would you like to see another one ?


Explanation: I cant write a poem:

This poem is about i cant write a poem, it talks about the excuses that i am giving because i cant write a poem and it talks about that i am having a dumb excuses. It also talks about that the teacher likes my poem and that i cant believe it. The theme is that i don't even know what a poem is.

Acrostic Poem : Story type

Daffa and his family went on a vacation
Australia was the place that Daffa visited
Found a koala in the Australian safari
Food they eat a lot
And Daffa came back to Jakarta

Making good work progress in school
And i don't know that t will work
Rarely the students get high score
Could i get a high score?
Have to work hard on march

When i wish upon the shooting star
I wish of a Mercedes car
Shooting star is now gone
Hunting for another one

Sun, the closest star to the earth
Urgently the power of the sun will run out
Non of the living creatures will survive

House, when me and my family stay
Our dog lives in a cage outside my house
My mom always cook breakfast and dinner for us
Even though shes busy, she still love us

Shine in the darkness
Told my friends what a beautiful star
A little tiny light 
Resting in the sky all night long

Explanation: March
This theme is about how hard the subject of school is on march. How do i get a high score in march and about what should i do to get a high score on march.

Wednesday, March 9, 2011

Haiku Poem Nature

Theme: Nature


Forest:
Forest green and wide 
Many trees and animals
Where living things lived


River:
River flow so fast
From the top of the mountain
Have a lot of fish


Eagle:
Fly up in the sky 
Fast as the Ferrari car 
Lift their wings up high 

Rain:
The clouds bring rain 
Wet to al the living things 
Raindrops everywhere


Waterfall:
There's a rusty rock 
water crashing through the rocks 
again and again


Rainbow:
Glorious rainbow 
have many colors
The god of colors

Explanation:
This theme is about nature it explains about how wonderful and beautiful the nature is. It also told us about the examples of nature.